Помогите пожалуйста перевести. Заранее спасибо. - вопрос №245378

Добрый день. В целом, с переводом моей коллеги согласна. Только кое-где я бы перевела немного по-другому. Посмотрите мой перевод как вариант.

My name is Eugenia Fadeyeva. I was born on May 3, 1991, in Vorkuta, the Komi Republic. I moved to Voronezh one year ago, but my family stayed in Vorkuta. My father works at the State Inspection for Road Traffic Safety. My mother is a housewife. She has a lot of things to do about the house.

In 2011, I graduated from college in Vorkuta. I got secondary
education majoring in programming. I liked studying at this college very much.

I did not have any favourite subjects as such, but I liked
practical training more. It was very interesting. I learnt many new things doing it(undergo– больше переводиться как подвергаться
чему-либо, например, в случае хирургической операции, а в данном случае практику студент проходил сам, лучше поставить просто глагол «do»).

During my studies at this college I got acquainted with
many people with whom I still maintain good relationships.

This year I have entered the Voronezh Agricultural University
named after Peter the Great.

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My name is Eugenia Fadeeva. I was born on May 3, 1991 in Vorkuta, Komi Republic. I moved to Voronezh a year ago, but my family stayed in Vorkuta. My father works at the State Inspection for Road Traffic Safety. My mother is a housewife. She has a lot of things to do about the house.

In 2011 I graduated from the college in Vorkuta. I gained secondary education majoring in programming. I liked to study at the college very much.

I didn't have favourite subjects, I liked practical training more. It was very interesting. I learnt a lot of new things while undergoing it.

During my studies I got acquainted with many people with whom I still communicate very well.

This year I have  entered the Peter I Voronezh Agrarian University.

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