Перевод на английский - вопрос №107255

Hi there(Greetings). My name is Riccardo (Ortega),approximately within 3 months I plan a family vacation. I have heard about your hotel/restaurant from a good friend of mine,he commended especially your place. Although,for me, most important things, such as an excellent service and high class of the place,so I would like to be certain that this option suits to my family.

1.For me,to make a decision I've got to get to know about the conditions,that offered by your hotel.So,send me,please an information package,the cost of all the offered service,and also some small souvenir with your logo,for my youngest son(he loves those things very much,so this is important for me as well!). Also,my wife asked,what kind of cosmetic products(body wash gels,shampoos,etc.) you provide in your rooms(suits),(and if it's possible,send me a few samples)

2.For us,in order to become your customers during our vacation,I need to know as much as I can about you,to see the interior design of the restaurant,to get to know your cuisine,your special courses.That is the reason I am asking to send me to my address few brochures with photos and description of your place,an if it's possible,a copy of menu.

I hope,that you will fulfill my request. Thank you!

I welcome you! I am called to Ricardo Ортега. Approximately in 3 months I plan together with family to leave on rest. I heard of your hotel / restaurant from the good friend, he recommended to arrive exactly to you. But because for me чрезвычайноважен excellent service, high status of establishment, then I would like to make sure whether this variant befits to our family.

1. In order that I made decision I must become familiar with the terms offered by your hotel. Therefore deport, please, to me informative package, cost of all given services, some souvenir products with your logotype for my cadet (he very loves it, therefore and for me this is important!). Also my wife asked to take interest what cosmetic (gels for a shower, shampoos et cetera) foreseen in your numbers (if it maybe, deport to steam of copies).

 2. In order that in a time of our rest we were your clients I must know about you anymore, see the interior of restaurant, know about your kitchen, about brandname dishes. Therefore I ask to deport on my address a few brochures with photos and description of your establishment, maybe, copy of menu.

I hope that you will execute my request. Thank you! 

         Уважаемый аноним! Позволю себе отметить, что первый ответ (от Алины), на мой взгляд, предпочтительней второго (от Сергея).

         Поясняю. Первый — «более английский», второй — явно с русским «акцентом» (напоминает почти дословный перевод с русского, что отнюдь не очень хорошо), не говоря уже о чисто технических ошибках во втором переводе (составленным, видимо, не человеком, а каким-нибудь электронным переводчиком. А Сергей, похоже, даже не удосужился просмотреть его ;-)  ).