Проверьте пожалуйста на грамматические ошибки... - вопрос №854363

Проверьте пожалуйста на грамматические ошибки. Большое спасибо)) Past is a good place to visit but not a good place to stay. Everyone has a past. Memories of it can be good or bad, but often we remember happy moments of life. Past — This is what we have lived a moment ago, a day ago, yesterday, it becomes our lifetoday. But still it is the beginning of the future in which we live today. There you can bring back memories, but the change did not succeed. In the past do not come back because it is destroying our future. Even if this happens, then the relationship between people are different. It could change for the better and for the worse. The past teaches us not to make mistakes and gain experience. Experience can not be good or bad, it's part of our life. Based on past experience we can draw conclusions, as we should do in order to get the desired result, as we should change our thinking, how not to act in any circumstances and so on. That is today's actions affect our future, and the past can serve only lesson the opportunity to see the error from a distance and fix them in the present. Sometimes it is necessary to forget about it for the future. Do not regret and do not scold myself for the past — because you were trying to be happy. We can not get away from his past. It will always be with us. But we have to put all effort into building a happy future. And for this we need to stop to think about past situations, stop living in the past. Do not allow the past to build your future, it is the task of the present .You do not lose your past, it's always with you, it will not be repeated, but your future is much more interesting, you become wiser, you get new skills, new knowledge, perception of your boundaries are constantly expanding. Our life in the present time is increasingly perceived by past experience, that is the principal error of perception and generates a set of constraints, stereotypes and beliefs that interfere succeed. The present lives only one who lives in the present. It is necessary to strive for their goals and then you will achieve much in life. We can not predict what awaits us ahead, but we can influence it. Past — it's a train, but he was already gone. Future — it is a dream, but it is not known whether it will come true. And now — it is a gift of life. Therefore, we must live in the present with hope for the future and past experiences Your past is fine, but the present and the future is much more beautiful, take the time at this point, and the formation of your future, do not waste your time in the blank!

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Past is a good place to visit but not a good place to stay. Everyone has a his/her past. Memories of it can be good or bad, but often we remember happy moments of life. Past… this is what we have lived survived a moment ago, a day ago, yesterday, and it becomes our life today. But still it is the beginning of the future in which we live today. There You can bring back memories there, but the change did not succeed. In the past Do not come back in the past because it is destroying destroys our future. Even if this it happens, then the relationship between people are different. It could change for the better and for the worse. The past teaches us not to make mistakes and gain experience. Experience can not be good or bad, it's part of our life. Based on past experience we can draw conclusions based on past experience, as we should do in order to get the desired result, as we should change our thinking, how not to act in any circumstances and so on. That is today's actions affect our future, and the past can serve only a lesson the opportunity to see the error from a distance and fix them in the present. Sometimes it is necessary to forget about it for the future. Do not regret and do not scold myself yourself for the past — because you were trying to be happy. We can not get away from his past. It will always be with us. But we have to put all effort into building a happy future. And for this we need to stop to thinking about past situations and living in the past. Do not allow the past to build your future, it is the task of the present .You do not lose your past, it's always with you, it will not be repeated, but your future is much more interesting, you become wiser, you get new skills, new knowledge, perception of your boundaries are constantly expanding. Our life in the present time is increasingly perceived by the past experience, that is the principal error of perception and generates a set of constraints, stereotypes and beliefs that interfere succeed. The present lives only one who lives in the present. It is necessary to strive for their goals and then you will achieve much in life. We can not predict what awaits us ahead, but we can influence it. Past — is a train, but he was already gone. Future — it is a dream, but it is not known whether it will come true. And now — it is a gift of life. Therefore, we must live in the present with hope for the future and past experiences. Your past is fine, but the present and the future is much more beautiful, take the time at this point, and the formation of your future, do not waste your time in the blank!

30.11.13
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