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My name is Nikolay. I am young, I am 21 years old. I was born in the city of Orenburg, because of big crime rate, our family moved. Now I live and I work in the city of Sovetsk. I work in police at the patrol and point-policeman's position. My basis a task is control of offenses and administrative offenses. For further career development I need education and therefore I combine work with study at Moskow university of finance and law. In 5 years I will be entitled the second lieutenant and I will be able to pass to a higher position.

Sovetsk (till 1946 — Tilsit). The second for the population number after Kaliningrad

The abundance of green zones, squares and parks, flowers on balconies in combination with numerous monuments of architecture do Tilsit-Sovetsk by the real garden city.